28 pages

[j_cheney]

After 2 full days of re-outlining an already completed mansucript, I have proceeded into the rewrite...WooHoo.

I'm 28 pages in. About 600 to go. Tired now.

Comments

[melissajm.livejournal.com]

Wow, this is a MAJOR rewrite. Good luck!

[j-cheney.livejournal.com]

Yes, I cut apart scenes and marked them in the outline by POV (Blue for Llelas, Green for Carmeyon, etc...)

In doing so I discovered a preponderance of Purple in one area, total lack of blue elsewhere. Since I intended Blue/Green/ and Purple to be equal POVs, I suddenly saw why I had some problems. That always helps me straighten things out. ;o)

[melissajm.livejournal.com]

Neat system.