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I just had a rather large element of the plot 'unfold' in my mind, presenting me with the reason for everything that happens in this book.

Yes, it waited until 2/3s of the way through the second draft to do so.

I blame the bunny. Keeping secrets from me again! Dratted bunny!

Date: 2009-04-10 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marshall-payne.livejournal.com
Sorry, J. Does give me a chance to use this icon I adopted just for your LJ. ;o)

Date: 2009-04-10 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Actually, this is a good thing, because the POV character is rather naive....so figuring things out late kinda fits her. But I still would rather have known myself.

Date: 2009-04-10 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kmarkhoover.livejournal.com
The bunny is very capricious.

Date: 2009-04-10 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Yea, verily...

Date: 2009-04-10 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] parishwhittaker.livejournal.com
Cue the Monty Python Holy Grail rabbit imagery in my mind...

Date: 2009-04-10 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Sorry, now you'll be at it all night...

Date: 2009-04-10 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jjschwabach.livejournal.com
The Bunny should be too busy to be causing trouble right now.

However, the Holy Hand Grenade of Antioch is bound to help.

Date: 2009-04-10 08:54 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-10 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babarnett.livejournal.com
I've had that happen 2/3 of the way through a short story before, but never novel length. That's one evil bunny.

Date: 2009-04-10 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Fortunately, it's not the POV characters actions that have suddenly become clear, but the impetus for several other people's actions--so it's not as bad as it could be. People have been hiding things from her all along, so why not this, as well....
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Date: 2009-04-10 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Actually not too much.

The chapters that I kep re-doing? (29 and 30) Those are the dividing point, so now I can proceed more comfortably.

When I do my read-through after finishing, I may need to add a few sentences for forewshadowing, but now I feel more competent to do that. This is a good thing, honestly ;o)

Date: 2009-04-10 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alaneer.livejournal.com
You need to hug that bunny, because you couldn't have planned it better.

Date: 2009-04-10 09:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
So true...

Date: 2009-04-10 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtglover.livejournal.com
Well, what did you expect at this time of year!? :) Glad to hear it appeared, in any case. At least you know what you'll be doing in the next draft...

Date: 2009-04-10 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
How true!

Date: 2009-04-11 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stinabat.livejournal.com
"Bunnies! Floppy, hoppy, bunnies!"

Date: 2009-04-11 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Evil floppy bunnies...

Date: 2009-04-11 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isleburroughs.livejournal.com
Perfect timing for plot bunnies:o)

Especially chocolate ones...mmmm....

Date: 2009-04-11 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Chocolate is the best ;o)

Date: 2009-04-12 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kara-gnome.livejournal.com
Yours is a frisky bunny! :D You sound pretty happy, so it must have been an awesome revelation (if I'm reading you right?). How much rewriting are we talking, here?

Date: 2009-04-12 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com
Actually, not as much as I'd feared due to the 'in the dark' nature of the POV character. I found it out about when she did...

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