Work Done

Slapped another three thousand words onto the story that I now have tentatively labeled "the nature of man", bringing it in under 7K. I've hopefully got a couple of people reading it, but I've already recalled a paragraph that I dropped out and a few little tidbits I didn't clean up. I suppose I'll put it on critters, but I really want to get it out to F&SF soon (not wanting to fall into the 8/18 slush-glut). I think it has a fairly masculine sound, which should be helpful in that market. I only hope it's not boring!

Need to get the story out that I got back from ROF. Doug Cohen said I needed to work on the milieu, kind if difficult when the POV's blind. Still, I'd like to get that fluffed and send it out again. I don't think it's right for F&SF, so I think it's going straight to Fantasy magazine.

Gotta get cracking!