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J. Kathleen Cheney ([personal profile] j_cheney) wrote2007-03-18 07:11 pm
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Aaahh

Figured out a way to fix the March story. Feeling better about this now. ;o)
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[identity profile] melissajm.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
Great news!

[identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, I realized I could make it a bit less passive....can't have that, you know.

[identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
It's about a girl who just keeps taking her husband back....after she finds out that he's an imposter....after she finds out he used to be a woman (shapechanger)....after he's dead....sort of...

That actually sounds passive, and if you think of an agrarian society....she probably wouldn't be out of the norm.

[identity profile] melissajm.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Not if she faces a lot of opposition from neighbors or other people who suspect that Something's Not Right, though.

[identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
That's not it, though. The conflict is mostly internal, which just doesn't sell.

[identity profile] melissajm.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Well, if you want a test reader...

[identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
I'm playing with it right now. Perhaps later this week?

[identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
It's about 6k, so not too long.

[identity profile] melissajm.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
No problem.
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