I hesitate to offer a suggestion regarding the pivotal scene. You're going to get it, never a doubt about that! but a small thing that seems to really help me, is when it's going like that, I tape record the story onto a cassette and listen to it, over and over while I'm doing other things. Washing dishes, brushing the dogs, whatever. I don't know how or why, but my ears seem to catch the teeny burr within the general iteration perfection.
Everyone's different, though, but I thought I'd say.
I've only read a few entries down my f-list, here, but what is spring mulching?
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Date: 2009-03-19 02:30 pm (UTC)I hesitate to offer a suggestion regarding the pivotal scene. You're going to get it, never a doubt about that! but a small thing that seems to really help me, is when it's going like that, I tape record the story onto a cassette and listen to it, over and over while I'm doing other things. Washing dishes, brushing the dogs, whatever. I don't know how or why, but my ears seem to catch the teeny burr within the general iteration perfection.
Everyone's different, though, but I thought I'd say.
I've only read a few entries down my f-list, here, but what is spring mulching?