Last Critiques in

Well, I got the last batch of critiques in, and found the later ones more useful than the early ones. (This is usually true. It seems that a lot of the early readers don't read thoroughly. They just scan through it, and they often miss things that the later readers find obvious. If an early reader comments on something that I thought was clear, but no one else does, then I usually put it down to that.)

I had a few points that were criticized by several readers, which I need to clean up. ( Read more... )