Well, finally gave up and I'm putting in an additonal POV. I have very little to go back and write because up to this point, this character's simply been sitting back and observing. So fortunately, I don't have to write much.
On the other hand, I know the character is going to die shortly after the end of the book, which makes writing that part a little weird. I'll see how I feel about it, and perhaps I'll strip her back out later. For now, it makes it possible to put in a great deal of story that wasn't there before due to lack of a POV person.
Compromises, compromises.
On the other hand, I know the character is going to die shortly after the end of the book, which makes writing that part a little weird. I'll see how I feel about it, and perhaps I'll strip her back out later. For now, it makes it possible to put in a great deal of story that wasn't there before due to lack of a POV person.
Compromises, compromises.