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OK, so I worked on TAM last night, and I cut it to 8K words. I still have a few more bits I can cut, but I'll wait until my first reader has a chance to go over it again. (I don't have to mail it any time soon) I tightened the ending. Hope it helps.

OK, so that leaves Shared Dreams and A Mention of Death still on the reivision desk with the novel stuff. AMOD is up this week at Critters, so I'll look at it after it goes through the scraping there. SD is still a worry for me. I want the story to work. I'm just not certain what I'm missing. I need to pump up the ending, and I think I've figured out how to do that. So today, after procrastinating for a bit....

I still have the critiques for ArmadilloCon to finish. Perhaps I'll do that first. ;o)

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