I skimmed the story in question on Critters but didn't leave a critique there (kinda backing out of Critters). I found the second half of the story (in the tavern) confusing. There were too many characters, and I never got a good picture of the physical layout of the place. I hope that helps.
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Date: 2007-08-02 06:15 pm (UTC)