Blood and Guts
May. 16th, 2007 06:48 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
j_cheneyI've spent most of the afternoon gutting a story--A Mention of Death
Had an aspect that didn't really work for the old beta readers, and even though it was, IMO, the most important event in the story, I had to toss it. Sigh.
So, I'll just move the story out six months, shuffle some things around, and hope it works this time. I'm going to try to slap the new version up on Baen's board before Friday, just to get some feedback.
I hate killing my babies. Don't you?
Had an aspect that didn't really work for the old beta readers, and even though it was, IMO, the most important event in the story, I had to toss it. Sigh.
So, I'll just move the story out six months, shuffle some things around, and hope it works this time. I'm going to try to slap the new version up on Baen's board before Friday, just to get some feedback.
I hate killing my babies. Don't you?
