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Nov. 10th, 2008
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Dragon Alterations...
Nov. 10th, 2008 01:37 pmSo, I'm reworking "The Dragon's Price"...finally.
I'm adding back the scenes in Prince Ilya's household that I'd excised before (readers, you won't be familiar with these). Dumping previous naming scheme for the series. Changing the name of D2 back to "Inheritance of Fire".
This will make it hit 10K. But I think it will be a more coherent story at 10K, the characters motivations will be clearer, and the ending will have less of a Deus ex machina effect, because the interrelatedness will be explained at the beginning of the story.
Oh, and more fire....
I'm adding back the scenes in Prince Ilya's household that I'd excised before (readers, you won't be familiar with these). Dumping previous naming scheme for the series. Changing the name of D2 back to "Inheritance of Fire".
This will make it hit 10K. But I think it will be a more coherent story at 10K, the characters motivations will be clearer, and the ending will have less of a Deus ex machina effect, because the interrelatedness will be explained at the beginning of the story.
Oh, and more fire....