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Jun. 11th, 2007 05:59 pmWorking on revisions...
I'm still not pleased with the revision of the first quarter of KD. I suspect I need to toss chapter 6 or 7, whichever it was that was bugging me last night. ::sigh::
I'm working on the revision of "Shared Dreams", which I can't assure will work from this POV (It necessitates some information being hidden from the POV, never resolved...which might annoy people). I started a second version using a different POV, but had the terrible feeling that it would end up near 20K....so I stopped. I'll probably post the First Draft of SD on Baen's tonight or tomorrow with the caveat that it's still a bit shaky.
I feel good about "The Dragon Wizard's Child" though, revision of which begins as soon as the other is posted. ;o)
Have I outlined the May story yet? Uh, no...
I'm still not pleased with the revision of the first quarter of KD. I suspect I need to toss chapter 6 or 7, whichever it was that was bugging me last night. ::sigh::
I'm working on the revision of "Shared Dreams", which I can't assure will work from this POV (It necessitates some information being hidden from the POV, never resolved...which might annoy people). I started a second version using a different POV, but had the terrible feeling that it would end up near 20K....so I stopped. I'll probably post the First Draft of SD on Baen's tonight or tomorrow with the caveat that it's still a bit shaky.
I feel good about "The Dragon Wizard's Child" though, revision of which begins as soon as the other is posted. ;o)
Have I outlined the May story yet? Uh, no...
