Home again, home again, dickory dock....
Back home again after being out of town, I had 170 e-mails to wade through. Oh, well.
I came back to a few critiques, none of which had a great deal to say. I'll probably see a whole slew on Tuesday. This is a pre-cleaning up version of the one I sent to Clarkesworld, so there are a couple of typos I subsequently got out in that version still lurking in the Critters version. As well, the C version is about 500 words longer, which![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
melissajm helped me trim. Things sit at Critters for about 4 to 5 weeks before they get critiqued sometimes, so I sent it there some time ago.
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I came back to a few critiques, none of which had a great deal to say. I'll probably see a whole slew on Tuesday. This is a pre-cleaning up version of the one I sent to Clarkesworld, so there are a couple of typos I subsequently got out in that version still lurking in the Critters version. As well, the C version is about 500 words longer, which
melissajm helped me trim. Things sit at Critters for about 4 to 5 weeks before they get critiqued sometimes, so I sent it there some time ago. Spoiler ( Read more... )