If you wanna send the story to a lapsed Critter, I'm at clawrie1 at bigpond dot net dot au.

The one time I posted a story on Critters, the least helpful crits were ones written by people going for a MPC. It looks like they just skim the story without actually taking it in, although in one way, we should be grateful to them - if the story totally sucked, they'd skip it entirely (I often did that if there was too much wrong with a story :) ).