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displaced_texan says the June story (WT "The Dragon's Child") needs 'more action'. I think that actually means 'it's dialog heavy'. It still needs setting and description, so it's pretty spare. Also, it needs an epilog. I'll look it over this week-end, perhaps.
Spent 3.25 hours gardening this morning. Slightly toasted on shoulders.
Thinking a little about the May story, but still haven't outlined it. Will work on the big revision this afternoon and evening, and try to get some progress made. I want it done relatively soon. (I was actually hoping for the end of June, but I suspect it will be the end of July.) ::sigh::
Must think of an idea for the July story.
displaced_texan says the June story (WT "The Dragon's Child") needs 'more action'. I think that actually means 'it's dialog heavy'. It still needs setting and description, so it's pretty spare. Also, it needs an epilog. I'll look it over this week-end, perhaps. Spent 3.25 hours gardening this morning. Slightly toasted on shoulders.
Thinking a little about the May story, but still haven't outlined it. Will work on the big revision this afternoon and evening, and try to get some progress made. I want it done relatively soon. (I was actually hoping for the end of June, but I suspect it will be the end of July.) ::sigh::
Must think of an idea for the July story.